Reading Notes: The Indian Heroes, Part A

 -First paragraph to a story can be used to explain the relationships between all characters and layout the context of where everything is happening and how they will. Not all stories can be jumped into because the reader won't always have prior knowledge of the main characters in the writing. In Kincaid's Mahabharata the introductory paragraph does nothing but explain how the main characters came to be and their relationships with others in the story.

-When writing multiple short stories in the same post, remember to lead into the next story with a short transition sentence at the end of the previous one. This gives the impression of an ongoing adventure that the reader is following.

-Introducing new characters in the middle of the story can be done in a way that doesn't halt the flow of storytelling. In Kincaid's Mahabharata, new characters are dropped and their relations to others are quickly explained in the same sentence without pausing the story.

Burning of Khandava Forest

Web source: The Indian Heroes: Mahabharata - The Princes of Elephant City, by C. A. Kincaid

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